It sounds like Change.org petitions experts recommend this structure:

Paragraph 1: Who is impacted? Describe how people are concretely affected by the problem.

The Seattle Mariners are consistently a not-very-good and not-fun-to-support franchise, yet the fans keep coming back. We love those guys and want to see our team win. But we, the fans, are fed up. 

Fans are spending millions of dollars each season to watch a sub-par team full of talented players lose. We come back with hope each and every season to be met with soul-crushing disappointment and sadness.

We, the fans, don't deserve this. And neither do the players. 

We all deserve an ownership team that truly cares about bringing winning baseball to Seattle instead of seemingly focusing only on the money they can line their pockets every year. 

Paragraph 2: What is at stake? Explain what it will mean if things change or stay the same.

If, and when, things change, this team will harness the power of our fanbase and the talent we acquire on the field to win a world series. 

We come back every year feeling fired up. We come back every year feeling like we could win it all.

But this teams gets us excited, they pull us in, and then they seem to forget how to play baseball.

If things stay the same, we know the story. We'll be around, or just below, a 54% winning percentage, barely miss the playoffs, then rinse and repeat for the next season. 

Paragraph 3: Why is now the time to act? Summarize and stress the importance of immediate action.

Without taking action, nothing will change. As the fans, we have to boycott this team and show them that without us, they are nothing. When we stop spending our time and money to support them, the Seattle Mariners ownership group will be forced to make changes...from the top.

Albert Einstein said it, not me: The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results.

The Seattle Mariners ownership group are the definition of insanity. The results will not change if we keep doing the same thing over and over. 

Clearly something is broken. And all we can do, as the fans, is try to fix it.

#MarinersBoycott2024