David wrote two opening paragraphs followed by “I thought you might find it helpful if I shared some of the feedback we received” and he then gave seven points. Amazingly, alterations were later made to the comments of the so-called expert by Commissioner Stella Manzie in a Freedom Of Information (FOI) response on 7.12.15. What victims and survivors immediately regarded as ridiculous statements in the FOI response on 7.12.15 have since been proven to be just that and worse. An internal review of the FOI was requested on 7.12.15. A detailed rebuttal of the points given in the FOI response was sent to Commissioner Malcolm Newsam and Lead Commissioner Derek Myers (and Christine Hotson, Senior Access to Information Officer Information Governance Unit) on 15.12.15 with the request to Christine Hotson “Please forward the attachment to the FOI reviewer”. The detailed rebuttal is well worth reading: Voices of Despair Voices of Hope and RMBC’s 1500 copies - A Response to FOI Response (7.12.15) - 15.12.15 http://real2.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/06/Voices-of-Despair-Voices-of-Hope-and-RMBC%E2%80%99s-1500-copies-A-Response-to-FOI-Response-7.12.15-15.12.15.pdf 25 comments and a final note on the highly reckless email sent by David McWilliams on 15.9.15: http://real2.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/06/Rotherham-Truth-Campaign-Petition-Update-26.6.17..pdf