Detail of proposed change give feedback by 11 Nov

Hello everyone,
An update on the progress to improve the intersection of Iris St & Oxford Falls Rd. I received an initial letter dated 30th Sept which indicated a concept plan for the areas improvement was underway. Today, I received a copy of a letter dated 8th October to local residents which illustrates the proposed concept plan. Note: they indicate it will be a two-stage plan. Firstly, a pedestrian traffic island on Oxford Falls Road and then secondly installation of a round a bout.
The proposed changes will be discussed in a local traffic committee meeting of the Northern Beaches council in December. In order to progress our cause I encourage you to indicate support for the change and provide additional comments on the plan directly to council by emailing council@northernbeaches.nsw.gov.au (Ref 2019/521272) by 11th November. You must include your name and address to formally register your comment.
Please see letter attached for more details here https://drive.google.com/open?id=1IH4l6RWMzll854DAHrJCPrctJB1Py4qk
I have drafted an email to council for you to cut and paste below to show support.
Regards, Merryn.
To: council@northernbeaches.nsw.gov.au
Subject: Support for Concept Plan (Ref 2019/521272) Fix Oxford Falls Rd & Iris St Intersection
Text for email body:
Dear Mr. Philip Devon and Northern Beaches Traffic Committee,
I am formally registering my support for the concept plan (Ref 2019/521272) to fix the intersection at Oxford Falls Road and Iris Street, Beacon Hill.
Name: First Name, Surname
Address: Number, Street, Suburb Postcode